In room 5 we were making a slideshow about Pet Day. We created three different types of writing for Pet Day about our pets, how I look after my pet, describing our pet and persuasive writing. Next we put pictures on the slides of Pet Day. Here is my Pet Day slideshow.
Hi Hunter, my name is William from Waikowhai Primary School. I agree that people should have a pet if they are sad about something. I had a pet gold fish and at night their tail would flick into the air spraying water into my face. You could have said what breed your dog was. If you want to see my learning here's the link: http://wpswilliamg.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter, my name is Torian and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. Something that I liked is that you had three photos of pets and it said pet day. Maybe next time you could add more punctuation instead of full stops. If you want to see my blog just go to: http://wpstorianr.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter, it's me Leah from Room 6. I really like your blog post about Pet day. I really like how you said try find the paw prints plus I found all of them which was cool. I hope you like this blog comment. This post is AMAZING!
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Leah from Room 6
Hi Hunter,my name is Cassie and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. Something that I like is that you had three photos of pets and it said pet day. I remember that when we had to do a slide of our favourite pet and then had to write about it. But if you had more than one or two pets that you like you had to make more slides. I wrote about a dog. Maybe next time you can blog about it by writing as well as pictures. If you would like to see my class blog and my blog here it is. http://wpsriceman.blogspot.com/ and http://wpscassiep.blogspot.com/.
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